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Post by Yoon on Feb 19, 2007 14:06:47 GMT -5
Since the other story has ended, here's the next story. Rules are the same as the last story thread:
1. Can only add 1 sentence to the story.
2. Same person can't double/triple/quadruple/etc. at one time to add more sentences to the story.
3. It has to make sense (somewhat) and connect with the story in some way.
Start:
"Somewhere in the Himalaya Mountains, there lay a box hidden away, left untouched and forgotten for over 2,500 years."
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Post by KillerSmo on Feb 19, 2007 15:05:10 GMT -5
No one knew what was in this mysterious box, but a small creature, Hoodlou, heard this tale and wanted to find out what was in the box.
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Post by phyxius on Feb 19, 2007 17:21:36 GMT -5
"Somewhere in the Himalaya Mountains, there lay a box hidden away, left untouched and forgotten for over 2,500 years."
"No one knew what was in this mysterious box, but a small creature, Hoodlou, heard this tale and wanted to find out what was in the box"
"so the small creature went to the airport to buy a ticket to the himalaya, but he got so scare with the big airplanes, that he ran away again to his home"
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Post by kyuubinaruto on Feb 19, 2007 19:48:14 GMT -5
"Somewhere in the Himalaya Mountains, there lay a box hidden away, left untouched and forgotten for over 2,500 years."
"No one knew what was in this mysterious box, but a small creature, Hoodlou, heard this tale and wanted to find out what was in the box"
"so the small creature went to the airport to buy a ticket to the himalaya, but he got so scare with the big airplanes, that he ran away again to his home"
"Unfortunately, on his way home he was killed by Naruto Uzumaki who then took it upon himself to find the box"
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Post by Jaegar on Feb 20, 2007 10:47:37 GMT -5
"so the small creature went to the airport to buy a ticket to the himalaya, but he got so scare with the big airplanes, that he ran away again to his home"
"Unfortunately, on his way home he was killed by Naruto Uzumaki who then took it upon himself to find the box"
Shortly after Naruto Uzmaki decided this, Hoodlou woke up (because he was really only unconscious) and decided that he absolutely must find out what was in the box because someone thought it was important enough to kill for.
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Post by KillerSmo on Feb 20, 2007 11:02:53 GMT -5
"Unfortunately, on his way home he was killed by Naruto Uzumaki who then took it upon himself to find the box"
Shortly after Naruto Uzmaki decided this, Hoodlou woke up (because he was really only unconscious) and decided that he absolutely must find out what was in the box because someone thought it was important enough to kill for."
Hoodlou knew what Naruto looked like, and he knew he needed to stay away from him or else he might die.
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Post by phyxius on Feb 20, 2007 11:06:38 GMT -5
"Unfortunately, on his way home he was killed by Naruto Uzumaki who then took it upon himself to find the box"
Shortly after Naruto Uzmaki decided this, Hoodlou woke up (because he was really only unconscious) and decided that he absolutely must find out what was in the box because someone thought it was important enough to kill for."
Hoodlou knew what Naruto looked like, and he knew he needed to stay away from him or else he might die.
"but then he realized that he can't run as a chicken from him, or that maybe if naruto find out that he is still alive...he will try to kill him again, so, he went to the armory near of his town"
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Post by KillerSmo on Feb 20, 2007 12:34:10 GMT -5
Shortly after Naruto Uzmaki decided this, Hoodlou woke up (because he was really only unconscious) and decided that he absolutely must find out what was in the box because someone thought it was important enough to kill for."
Hoodlou knew what Naruto looked like, and he knew he needed to stay away from him or else he might die.
"but then he realized that he can't run as a chicken from him, or that maybe if naruto find out that he is still alive...he will try to kill him again, so, he went to the armory near of his town"
Being a nice guy, Hoodlou would NEVER kill anoyone, so he loaded up on armor and went back to the airport to buy a plane ticket.
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Post by Yoon on Feb 20, 2007 13:09:08 GMT -5
"Somewhere in the Himalaya Mountains, there lay a box hidden away, left untouched and forgotten for over 2,500 years."
"No one knew what was in this mysterious box, but a small creature, Hoodlou, heard this tale and wanted to find out what was in the box"
"so the small creature went to the airport to buy a ticket to the himalaya, but he got so scare with the big airplanes, that he ran away again to his home"
"Unfortunately, on his way home he was killed by Naruto Uzumaki who then took it upon himself to find the box"
Shortly after Naruto Uzmaki decided this, Hoodlou woke up (because he was really only unconscious) and decided that he absolutely must find out what was in the box because someone thought it was important enough to kill for."
Hoodlou knew what Naruto looked like, and he knew he needed to stay away from him or else he might die.
"but then he realized that he can't run as a chicken from him, or that maybe if naruto find out that he is still alive...he will try to kill him again, so, he went to the armory near of his town"
"Being a nice guy, Hoodlou would NEVER kill anoyone, so he loaded up on armor and went back to the airport to buy a plane ticket."
"However, at the airport, Hoodlou was very hungry, so he decided to have lunch at Chipotle."
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Post by TomTom on Feb 20, 2007 13:43:06 GMT -5
Somewhere in the Himalaya Mountains, there lay a box hidden away, left untouched and forgotten for over 2,500 years; No one knew what was in this mysterious box, but a small creature, Hoodlou, heard this tale and wanted to find out what was in the;so the small creature went to the airport to buy a ticket to the himalaya, but he got so scare with the big airplanes, that he ran away again to his; Unfortunately, on his way home he was killed by Naruto Uzumaki who then took it upon himself to find the; Shortly after Naruto Uzmaki decided this, Hoodlou woke up (because he was really only unconscious) and decided that he absolutely must find out what was in the box because someone thought it was important enough to kill for; Hoodlou knew what Naruto looked like, and he knew he needed to stay away from him or else he might die. but then he realized that he can't run as a chicken from him, or that maybe if naruto find out that he is still alive...he will try to kill him again, so, he went to the armory near of his town; Being a nice guy, Hoodlou would NEVER kill anoyone, so he loaded up on armor and went back to the airport to buy a plane ticket; However, at the airport, Hoodlou was very hungry, so he decided to have lunch at Chipotle. But instead of lunch at Chipotle he decided to have Gyro's instead  |
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Post by KillerSmo on Feb 20, 2007 14:24:14 GMT -5
"Being a nice guy, Hoodlou would NEVER kill anoyone, so he loaded up on armor and went back to the airport to buy a plane ticket;
However, at the airport, Hoodlou was very hungry, so he decided to have lunch at Chipotle."
"But instead of lunch at Chipotle he decided to have Gyro's instead"
But Hoodlou realized that Gyro's SUCKS, so he went back to Chipotle and had a steak burrito right before he boarded his flight!
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Post by TomTom on Feb 20, 2007 15:26:18 GMT -5
grrr.
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Post by KillerSmo on Feb 20, 2007 15:44:28 GMT -5
*First of all... he HAD A BURRITO - that means he physically ate it. Had is past tense - he's on his plane now... He never got his Gyro. He can eat one when he gets off the plane, but not now! HE'S ON THE PLANE (hence the line 'right before he boarded his flight')!
**(not aimed at Jesse) Hoodlou is NOT human - he is a creature (stated in the 2nd line of the story). People would look at him like he's a freak.
***(aimed at Jesse) OWNED
Try again...
"Being a nice guy, Hoodlou would NEVER kill anoyone, so he loaded up on armor and went back to the airport to buy a plane ticket;
However, at the airport, Hoodlou was very hungry, so he decided to have lunch at Chipotle."
"But instead of lunch at Chipotle he decided to have Gyro's instead"
But Hoodlou realized that Gyro's SUCKS, so he went back to Chipotle and had a steak burrito right before he boarded his flight!
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Post by TomTom on Feb 20, 2007 15:52:37 GMT -5
Being a nice guy, Hoodlou would NEVER kill anyone, so he loaded up on armor and went back to the airport to buy a plane ticket;
However, at the airport, Hoodlou was very hungry, so he decided to have lunch at Chipotle."
"But instead of lunch at Chipotle he decided to have Gyro's instead"
But Hoodlou realized that Gyro's SUCKS, so he went back to Chipotle and had a steak burrito right before he boarded his flight!
So Hoodlou bored his flight for Greece in search of the world famous Falafel Balls.
BTW if he's a creature wouldn't be a little strange to order from Chipotle?
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Post by KillerSmo on Feb 20, 2007 15:54:12 GMT -5
"But instead of lunch at Chipotle he decided to have Gyro's instead"
"But Hoodlou realized that Gyro's SUCKS, so he went back to Chipotle and had a steak burrito right before he boarded his flight!"
"So Hoodlou bored his flight for Greece in search of the world famous Falafel Balls."
While on the plane, Hoodlou noticed that everybody was staring at him.
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